Hey I finished it... well I had to take a break, I have been working through the whole weekend... ugh. O well. I hope you all enjoy. It is an idea for a villain character for my unkoil character. Considering I created my unkoil guy with C.o.H. I was playing and saw this cool ass creep. Didn't like how they did them and really wanted to do a more diabolical venom type mix for a villain. So enjoy
Looks great, but I think more could be done to make him look more like gelatin (at least, that's what I think you were going for).
Add bubbles maybe, make him slightly more see-through, make the harsh overhead lighting less opaque, or something. Right now, he looks too solid. Try looking at some gelatin, or pictures of gelatin, for reference of how you can see through it and what makes it look like gelatin.
Also, the part of the foremost arm where you can see the arm behind it looks a little too cartoonish when compared to the rest of the work.
I think this idea is awesome, by the way. When I saw the lines for it, I almost asked if I could colour it myself.
the background (cityscape) doesn't seem to make much sense however. I think it would be cooler if the background were just completely dark, so the lamppot is the only thing revealing this creature.
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Add bubbles maybe, make him slightly more see-through, make the harsh overhead lighting less opaque, or something. Right now, he looks too solid. Try looking at some gelatin, or pictures of gelatin, for reference of how you can see through it and what makes it look like gelatin.
Also, the part of the foremost arm where you can see the arm behind it looks a little too cartoonish when compared to the rest of the work.
I think this idea is awesome, by the way. When I saw the lines for it, I almost asked if I could colour it myself.
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only thing is the pelvis looks like its part of the arm, im not getting the feeling that its further back on the body
not quite sure how u could remedy it but this is lookin pritty good
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the creature itself is great too
the background (cityscape) doesn't seem to make much sense however. I think it would be cooler if the background were just completely dark, so the lamppot is the only thing revealing this creature.
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One thing I found wierd though was the lighting on the face area. Some of the lines for me blend in... my eye is being distracted.
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